A poem inspired by Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Stellar
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Senryu – ‘The Orchestra Played’ – A poem by Goff James
Beautiful with each word. The imagery is divine.
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Hi, Lucy. Many thanks for reading my poem ‘The Orchestra Played’ and your very kind comments. Have a wonderful day.
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Oh, perfection! What a wonderful Haiku and I love your take on the prompt. Thank you for participating.
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Ah! Now I understand. Haiku or Senryu; Nature versus Man/Woman with a touch of irony and satire ‘thrown’ in as well.Mmm…! Ha! However there are some where those ‘caps don’t fit’. Thanks Eugenia for your very kind comments. Truly appreciated. Have a great day.
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Yep, I agree on the Haiku/Senryu thing. IMO, there is a gray area between the two. 😬
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I guess one just has to draw ones own boundaries and go with ones ‘gut feeling’ about the matter. Have a great day.
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Sorry, I meant Senryu and not Haiku. 😉
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No problem. I often wonder where the boundary lies between Haiku and Senryu. In my readings and research it appears to be very much a grey area; where, the one can flow into the other and back again. At times I become totally confused by the labels we attach to these ‘little seventeen syllable villains’ that I try to write. Have a great day.
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Aha, great minds think alike!
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Ditto. Ha! Ha! Best Regards.
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Hi, Eugenia. Many thanks for the link. Have a great day.
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Hi, Eugenia. Thanks for the feature and link. Happy Monday.
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